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your back!!

you're back!! well kind of i guess..but its great to see a new animation from you! the first episode of this was hilarious, and this one was good too!!

pretty good!

overall it was a good piece! the animation was nice any smooth..my only critique was the arm swinging!! it just looked really weird they way they swung like noodles..it acted more as a distraction...

the humor was good in most parts..sure you've relied on using cliche'd stereotyped characters.. the super frenchmen, the flamboyant gay guys and the hippie stoner guy...which I guess..works..kinda..i think its a little tiring..but I could see how others would be entertained by it....and then there were some parts where you couldn't really tell where the humor/jokes were going...like the part with the Simpsons(?) guy...

other than that it was good!

Jazza responds:

yeah their arms were meant to be like that :P

thanks for the constructive points mate :)

Awesome! but not perfect

the whole concept and character deisgns were awesome, but it had some problems..

I dunno if it was just my computer or the way you exported stuff, but some parts were kinda laggy...some of the animation got a little choppy in areas, and in other parts with all the action going on you couldn't really tell what was going on very clearly...so it wasn't completely fluid throughout the whole thing, but overall it was really great stuff!

done for a good cause, but lousy animation

It's unfortunate that Yotam has been drafted against his will and making a animation for him is nice...

but that was some pretty lousy animation..and wasn't very humorous at all..it's like the collabers didn't even try or just aren't very good to begin with..sorry to sound harsh but that's what I thought of it..the only decent parts where the transitions and scottwjsm's piece....

turtleco responds:

the first 2 parts were pretty snazzy in my opinion :P

nice lil tribute

There wasn't anything special about the animation, but it was a nice lil tribute.

is it certain that he is really in the army now? Well if so, I hope Yotam does okay in the army, and dosen't see much action that could endanger his life. :(

Graeme responds:

He has already left, yes.
My understanding is he's not out there doing any killing.
I suppose in the army there is always a risk, and I do truely hope he stays safe.
We all wish him the best

very nice looking!

there wasn't a whole lot of animation, but stylistically/visually it was really nice :) the oekaki style was different. I liked it. Just work on getting more animation and I think you are off to a good start!

pretty good for your first attempts at Flash..!

The story/concept is entertaining, and visually everything looked pretty good.
but:

The story could be written better, some of the jokes didn't go over too well, and just weren't that funny. Plus as you pointed out, the voices weren't as good as they could have been. the kids's voice could have been a little louder and more clear, and the alien cook..was pretty generic and boring sounding.

Also, the animation was a little stiff and I guess, "cheap" in some parts...it definately could use some improvement.

I hope that wasn't too harsh, it was still good! You are off to a good start! :)

pretty good!

you have definately come a long way from some of your older work...the animation wasn't perfect, in some parts it was nice and smooth and in other parts it got kinda choppy, but over all it was pretty good...

interesting story.. i couldn't tell who to root for..i mean evolution is good but maybe in this context its bad...? but then there are the religious protesters..who are like the WBC but with style...hah i dunno...i guess in that crazy world you set up there aren't any "good" people around anymore?

JazLyte responds:

exactly. =)

haaaaaaaa.

HAH! i knew it was going to turn gay! i mean really, who didn't see that coming? >_>

hehe...

I kept waiting for the monster to turn into something freaky and scare me. xD although it was pretty creepy looking to begin with..random but funny tho. nice work!

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